This is a letter to the McDonalds Corporation. My inspiration for this piece was the book Ms. Duffy read for us in class about the funny letters that were actually sent to the major corporations. You can say whatever you would like about my piece.
http://www.scribd.com/doc/26368647/McDonalds-Letter
a fantastic display of whimsy and intrigue
ReplyDeleteI really liked this piece and thought it was a lot of fun. The problem I saw was that the sentences lacked a certain rhythm. They are a bit short, and some commas are needed. Overall it's good though.
ReplyDeleteI thought your letter was funny and creative. The sentences in the second half didn't flow as well, but I really liked the piece. Good job!
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