This piece shows the beauty that winter really has. I wanted to explain that winter can be beautiful. I always hear people complaining about winter. I wanted to prove them wrong. Please PRESS! http://www.scribd.com/doc/25940817/Mistaken-Beauty
Hey Mitch, I really like this piece. I was able to see great imagery from the words you chose to use. i would make it longer. and maybe have a slight bit of rythme to it.! k bye:)
I thought this was a really good piece. There was great imagery and i agree with you that winter is truly beautiful. There was great vocab and nice fluency.
I think that you did a very nice job Mitch! the imagery was fabulous as well as the word choice. I could imagine everything you included in your poem. I agree with Sabrina, I think you could add some rhyme to it just to make it a little bit more interesting, other than that it was an amazing poem!
Hey Mitch, I really like this piece. I was able to see great imagery from the words you chose to use. i would make it longer. and maybe have a slight bit of rythme to it.! k bye:)
ReplyDeleteI thought this was a really good piece. There was great imagery and i agree with you that winter is truly beautiful. There was great vocab and nice fluency.
ReplyDeleteI think that you did a very nice job Mitch! the imagery was fabulous as well as the word choice. I could imagine everything you included in your poem. I agree with Sabrina, I think you could add some rhyme to it just to make it a little bit more interesting, other than that it was an amazing poem!
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