I wrote this piece after i finished reading a book about cryptology, and how there is always a hidden code in things. I wanted to write about it in the way that i did because i thought that it would be interesting to try to write a good piece of writing, and have that writing contain some simplistic code in it. I decided that a poem would be the easiest to create like this.
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http://www.scribd.com/doc/25879668/Coded-Message-Address
i like the fact that you used a poem in your writing and i liked that your writing is very interesting and different. i would keep writing poems because they are fun to read, but maybe you can try another form of writing.
ReplyDeleteWow! That was really cool how you wrote your poem without any rhyming scheme. I liked the types of long words that you used in your piece as well. I loved the poem and would say maybe to try writing another one in a form of a certain rhyming scheme:) Nice job!
ReplyDeleteThis is a really well-written piece. It made me think about what message you were trying to get through. The only thing I don't understand, though, is who the poem is really speaking to, since at the beginning it asks a question to the reader and then talks about a man. I think you should make this more clear, unless that was the purpose. Otherwise, it was an awesome piece. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your poem and how you based it off a book. Plus you put a summary of the book at the end of the poem. I think you could add more sentence fluency and rythme. But other than that it was awesome!
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