http://www.scribd.com/doc/26120681/A-Game-Called-Life
This is the beginning of what I was hoping to become a short story; I began writing this on my free time and decided to turn it in for the fun of it. It's mostly personal and has a lot of meaning behind it.
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I'm glad you posted this. Even if its personal for you, others could very well relate to it if they read between the lines. By the way, you always have me.
ReplyDeleteI thought this was a great piece. I liked your introduction a lot. Your writing is very good and makes me want to read the rest of the short story. I don't think you need to change anything.
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