http://www.scribd.com/doc/26120312/Goodbye-Mask
I felt the need to write this poem after multiple epiphanies I had going into high school. With the help of family and close friends, I'm in the process of finding myself, and discovering who I want to be. How can anyone do that while hiding their inner-being?
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Beautiful, Jade. I really liked your word choice. I agree with the entire poem too.
ReplyDeleteI loved this poem! Its very... real. Don't change a thing, its amazing the way it is! :)
ReplyDeleteJade Nelson. I love this poem.
ReplyDeleteI love the way that your mind works, because I've read your writing before. You described people in highschool as wearing a mask, and no one being who they're said to be. I completely and entirely agree with you. I loved your poem, you're an amazing writer. :)
I liked how you used descriptive words that creates an image in your mind as you read this poem. Your poem is unique in the way that has a beginning, middle, and an end. It is easy to see the flow of thoughts while reading your poem. I thought that this helped me to understand the poem better, and to make it more enjoyable. Overall, you did a great job.
ReplyDeleteI love love love this poem. The emotion you put into it is amazing and the thoughts and feelings are so relatable. My favorite part is the resolution at the end, it's inspiring. You did an awesome job :)
ReplyDeleteJade i though this was really amazing. You had such good word choice and your voice really came through in it. Good job !
ReplyDeleteYou really are a great writer. Everything that flies from your fingers to the keyboard are emotion-filled, inspirational, helpful, full of truth, advice and your own values. This poem really reflects upon life well and you used awesome word choice, voice and detail. I want you to read mine too! Its the defeat of a bully (:Great job
ReplyDeleteYour poem was amazing. It flowed really well together, and had really great message. Your voice was really strong throughout the piece and it made everything your saying even more believeable. I think a lot of people would be able to connect with this poem in different ways, which makes it even more interesting to read. All together i thought you did a really great job and theres nothing really i can think of for you to change. good job!
ReplyDeleteJade, your such a great writer. I really liked this poems orginality and the theme of it. Your word description was great too. So i don't think you should change a thing (:
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