I was inspired to write this poem after reading Romeo and Juliet. I found it really interesting how the whole story relied on fate. It was fate that brought them together, and in the end; fate that led to their death. It's not very good, but i hope you like it! Address please(:
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Natalie i thought this was really good. I liked how you really related it to Romeo and Juliet. I think you could have expressed your feelings a little more, but other than that it was really good.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem Natalie! I liked how much thought you put into the poem. This really enhanced the emotions in the poem. Your poem made me think and that's a good thing. There are a few error that you can fix, and some of your sentences don't flow as well as they could. If you fix these few things your poem will be amazing. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI thought that this was a really great poem Natalie, very well done! This poem was very deep and I thought it was great the way you drew inspiration from Romeo and Juliet! I think you could make it even better if you changed some of the word choice, I think it could really enhance the poem. Other than that, I thought it was really great!
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