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I was mowing the grass, when a large Bolivian man walked past, with a crocodile on a leash. As I stroked the large reptile, he introduced himself as Gary Longooney. And the rest, as they say, is history.
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I thought this was actually a really good story. it was interesting and kind of mysterious. I think if you just extend it then it would be much better.
ReplyDeleteThis is a greay story. It was so interesting and different. It wasnt like a regular boring english essay or something. Your imagination is awesome and quite funny. I enjoy your writing style and I look forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the story, but i feel you could have described the plot and the setting a little more. I did enjoy your charecter, however. Overall, good job.
ReplyDeleteThis was a good story. Your description is really clear and I like the banana-smuggling twist. You should make it longer, though, like adding a little more background to the events of the story.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this piece Mitch. It flowed really well and it had an element of suspense. I liked the cliffhanger ending, but I feel like it could be a little but longer.
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