Tuesday, January 26, 2010

How the World Started and How it Will End!!!

This piece of literature that you are about to read is my opinion on how the world started and how it will end. Although I am pretty sure you knew that once you read the title. Anyway this piece started from my free write and I decided to extend it for a portfolio piece. I really did not have any inspiration for this piece. The topic sort of popped into my head and I just kept writing more and more. I hope you enjoy it. It is kind of short but its has humor to keep you entertained. I really just want this piece to be BLESSED because it was just for fun. As I said again I hope you enjoy it but if you do not that’s okay too.

http://www.scribd.com/doc/25866755/Portfolio-Piece
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6 comments:

  1. Frank SivilloJanuary 27, 2010 at 5:08 PM

    this is a pretty funny free write. i think it is really funny how you had nothing to write about and just went with it. i really think this a really funny piece.

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  2. TeaganJanuary 27, 2010 at 6:53 PM

    Dmitriy, this was a nice light piece. i like the way you wrote it like you would a regular thought process. It makes it easy to follow, relate, and gives you thoughts to take away with you. Nice job

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  3. Zach WykoffFebruary 4, 2010 at 6:08 AM

    I found your piece veary fun to read Dmitriy. I liked how you just kept going on and it led you to more and more things to talk about. Keep writing!

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  4. nataliekriegerFebruary 4, 2010 at 6:10 AM

    I like the message at the end , " i say you should live your life to the fullest." That is a great message to live your life by. I like how you took your free write which was talking about nothing, and bringing it onto a topic.It flowed into the peice well. I thought it was also a pretty funny peice. Good job! (:

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  5. Leslie RohdeFebruary 4, 2010 at 11:17 AM

    Ohhh Dmitriy! I actually really like this piece, honestly. I totally agree with the calendar thing being balogna. Maybe whoever was making it got bored of making a calendar is whole life! This was a very creative piece.

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  6. sidd the slothFebruary 7, 2010 at 3:32 PM

    Nice piece dmitriy, I really liked the free flowing thoughts that made up the piece. It was very creative and I do agree with you in many of your points. I also like your message at the end because it's a nice little inspirational wuote to send off the readers. Overall, Good Job

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