This narrative poem was inspired by a rather frivolous free write with a silly joke. Nonetheless, the joke ended with a question mark. I commented on what a strange symbol the question mark was. Its a squiggle and a dot . I decided to come up with my own original story as to how it came about. I liked the idea of making a folktale, but I wasn't sure if I had the time, so I settled for a narrative poem.
Press it.
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Ima, this was a very unique poem. i know im supposed to press it but i cant really find anything wrong with it. your word choice was phenomenal. the only thing is i came away from this feeling a little depressed. but seeing as that is how you wrote the poem it isn't necessarily a bad thing.
ReplyDeletewow........... that was a great poem. Your word chioce was phenominal, and so was your content. Though it was very confusing, so I had to read it many times over to understand it. That would be the only thing I would change ,make it less confusing,but not too much that it loses its unique style and vioce.
ReplyDeleteIma this was an amazing poem. Like Lauren, the word choice was amazing and I felt it was a very mature and professional sounding poem. All in all it was very great poem, although I did find myself rereading it. I don't think that this piece needs very much revising and I really can't think of any suggestions. Fantastic work Ima! (:
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