This piece is just what the titles says, change. Its just my views and how I think change should be expressed. It was inspired by this poem from W.s. Merwin. It was just a thoughtful piece, so I think you should just BLESS it. Thanks guys, enjoy
http://www.scribd.com/doc/25868551/Change-by-Kristen-Hirter
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I thought that this was a very insightful piece, and it shows that you put a lot of thought into your writing. I like that you didn't feel the need to reach one general attitude about change; there are a lot of different outcomes from it. I do agree that it's an inevitable part of life, and the sooner you realize that, the better off you'll be.
ReplyDeleteThis was a great piece that really showed what change was. The way you described change was true your use of examples backed up what you wrote greatly.
ReplyDeleteKristen, This was a really great piece. you could hear your voice through the thoughtful points in your writing. They were thought out and gave the reader something to think about after you have stopped reading. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece, Kristen. Your voice is really strong and I respect that. I love the use of all the rhetorical questions too, it makes the reader think. You did a great job. :)
ReplyDeleteKristen, I really enjoyed reading your peice! It made me have a whole new veiw of change and made me think about how I cope with change and if i should cope with it in a different way. I also like how you said change is good or bad depending on how you cope with it. It was a very inspiring peice
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