This is a poem I wrote about a depressed penguin who wishes it could fly with all the other birds. I had no inspiration for this piece. I was just thinking of how a penguin might feel about being a flightless bird. I would like my poem to be blessed. Hope you like it!
http://www.scribd.com/doc/25878496/Unable-to-Fly
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Sophie, I really liked the poem. I think it perfectly says how a penguin might feel since it can't fly. I know it wouldn't be a good feeling, and you showed that. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThis poem showed very well what a penguin may feel like because it cannot fly. It was a great poem and a good read.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely loved how you wrote the poem in an animal's point of view! It was a nice rhyming scheme and wasn't to confusing to read or to short to forget.
ReplyDeleteThis was really cute and i enjoyed the poem being told in an animals point of veiw. It wasnt a confusing topic or hard to understand. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThanks guys! I'm glad you liked it. It is one of my favorite poems out of all the poems I have written.
ReplyDeleteGreat job sophie. the ryming was very good. it flowed so nicely togterher. and what an interesting and unique topic...i love it :)
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this poem. I thought you used good imagery to capture the bird's feelings. Also, your rhyme scheme was enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteI loved this piece Sophie. I thought you did a great job at rhyming and with the point of view. This is the type of poem that I would want to read and not get bored of. Good job!
ReplyDeletei loved this poem, the rhyming was terrific! I liked your varying word choice also:) good job!
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