Friday, January 29, 2010
Fire
*bless!
This is the free write that I wrote, the inspiration was a picture of fire.
11/17/09
The zipping of tents and sleeping bags is what I wake up to. The fire crackles and the light filters through the tent making everything blue. I sit up and stretch. The scent of pancakes entices me out of the warm shelter of our tent and into the cool morning air. I see my dad at the fire pit making pancakes over the fire, my favorite sight in the world.
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ReplyDeletei really liked this piece. it was very interesting and i like how you used imagery. great job!
ReplyDeleteyou had great imagery megan. it was like the piece came strait out of a book. You have veary good description. Good job!
ReplyDeleteA very visual piece. It seemed to show your feelings towards camping very well.
ReplyDeleteYou encompassed the excitement of camping very well, great job with your description!
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