My piece was a piece inspired by literature, and I got my idea for the story from The Luxe series. The Luxe is about drama that occurs between the young ladies of a high-class society set in the late 1800 and early 1900's. I didn't title my piece because I couldn't think of a good name for it, but it doesn't really matter. I'll think of one eventually. I'm asking for address because I'm not sure where to take the piece from where it ends, since I'd like to continue it. I'm also not sure if the ending is too sudden and I need to stretch it out a bit. Other than that, I'm pretty happy with this piece. Let me know what you think :)
Link : http://www.scribd.com/doc/25932844/untitled
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This story is amazing. And I'm not just saying that because you're, like, my best friend. You have to write more. I was litterally on the edge of my seat while I was reading that last bit where she is captured. I love it. And it is sooo not sudden it's perfect because its just enough info to keep you reading. Please continue this story! :)
ReplyDeleteYour piece has great description of characters that make it more interesting than some would think. I also liked how you made the voice of the characters really fit the time period.
ReplyDeleteyou also incorporated themes from every day life even now. The only thing i would reccommend would be to lenghten out the drama before she is put unconscious either by dialog,or a fake love twist. Otherwise, great unpredictable story!