Wednesday, January 27, 2010

Mr Spacek.

i wrote this poem because it covers a topic that really means a lot to me. mr. spacek's book has a very realistic topic, and it just so happens that it happened to my friends and i in real life. the book is very good and it is very interesting and you would have a great time reading it.

Bless.

www.scribd.com/doc/25941200/mr-spacek?secret_password=ml4nng3whaftd3abedo

7 comments:

  1. frank, nice poem. it was structured well. i liked the idea and content. the poem shows how attached to the subjects you are. great job, and keep up the good work!

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  2. Great poem. I liked the way you used rhyme and the poem was very creative. "Although he's gone he's still very near."
    That was great.

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  3. Nice poem. You had good rhyming, and I liked the way you connected it real life. You showed good creativity and writting style.

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  4. Great poem! I liked the rhyming you put into your poem. I thought that it was creative and sounds very inspiring. Also, I feel that the phrases flowed very well together.

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  5. great poem frank! i could see how much you feel for tommy in this poem! keep it up dude

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  6. Good poem! I liked how all of the lines flowed together. You did a great job at getting your point of view and feelings across. Your poem was creative and thoughtful. Good job!

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  7. Frank, i love this poem i thought it was really good and flowed well. I thought your emotion was expressed extremly well! good job:)

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